domingo, 24 de enero de 2010

COMPARATIVE

Last class we discussed the comparative and I thought compared to Edward Cullen with Jacob Black characters of "twilight" so here are their faces...They are very very handsome.




Jacob Black


* wolf man
* brown skin
* short
* strong
* black eyes
* handsome
* I love him
* He is love Isabella



Edward Cullen


* vampire
* skin white and bright
* tall
* golden eyes
* drinks blood
* strong
* handsome
* I love him
* He is love Isabella


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Jacob is more handsome than Edward.

Jacob eater than Edward but Edward is stronger than Jacob.

I love Edward more than I love Jacob.

Jacob loves Isabella but she is love Edward.




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  1. Eric Forsythe26 de enero de 2010, 17:09

    Jake, I love this idea! Good job. Here are a few changes I would make.

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    Jacob eater than Edward but Edward is stronger than Jacob (Jake, what is "eater"?)

    I love more Edward than Jacob ("I love Edward more than I love Jacob" This is to use verbs such as LOVE)

    Jacob is love Isabella but she is love Edward
    (For this part you have two options:
    "Jacob is in love with Isabella" Or you could say, "Jacob loves Isabella")

    Let me know if you have any questions!

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